Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
Sunday, September 7, 2014

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Action and reaction are the truth of nature,
As per doing we get back as time does nurture.
We are only the cause of our birth affects more,
But being the sieve we say needle has a pore.
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Mantu Mahakul
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Akhtar Jawad 01 April 2015

A thoughtful poem, it's really wonderful...........................10

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Kelly Kurt 22 March 2015

The wisdom and truth presented in your poem are undeniable. Thank you. May I suggest not trying so hard to rhyme and just speak the words that carry your thoughts. They are the beauty, not the cadence or rhyme. It is impressive that you and others around the world, use the tongue I take for granted, so well as a second or third language. Peace

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Valsa George 25 October 2014

I think here you mean wisdom! It comes from God and it prevents us from falling into danger! It gives the light to see others as our own brethren....! It directs us across the right path! Good poem!

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Mantu Mahakul

Mantu Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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