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Patches lived and patches died
Her life was not in vain, as penniless
as a pauper, her wealth of gold
lied within her heart
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Such a beautiful story. You did a great job with the descriptions and I especially loved the reminder at the end.
This is a great work Bonnie, I love the way that you use the patches of colour to describe personality. Wonderful poem. Best wishes, Andrew x
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8/16/2025 6:12:33 AM # 1.0.0
Patches of colour in the life of a person reveal different moods well in your poem!