Monday, February 4, 2008

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When death ends life
A thread is torn
The knot is tied
And the child is born
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James B. Earley
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Meggie Gultiano 08 March 2009

well, this is a nice write, James. and a pleasure to read, too. hugs, meggie

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Seema Chowdhury 05 March 2009

very inspiring words and very true. thanks for sharing this lovely piece with me.

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Aldo Kraas 04 March 2009

You wrotte a fine poem

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Marilyn Lott 04 March 2009

I have seen this happen many times and it's painful and yet wonderful at the same time but it's the pattern of life. You said it so beautifully, my friend! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Esther Leclerc 05 February 2008

Those Norns... The second stanza in particular hits home. Delicately done...

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Mary Gordley 04 February 2008

Love this and the idea of the thread that ending one life also begins another. Thanks

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James B. Earley

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