Monday, December 26, 2005

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Rating: 4.3

His dog was home Alone
He didn't even have a Bone
He layed there, with big sad Eye's
Waiting for his master and his Lie's
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David Darbyshire
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Shannon Chapel 07 January 2006

This is so gosh darn cute, Dave! A 10 from me. Shannon xoxo

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***** ********* 26 December 2005

A sweet little story of breaking free and the dawning of personal responsibility David. Very nicely done. Merry Christmas my friend.10 from Tai, trying very hard to Smile all the way through...

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Seán O' Muiriosa 26 December 2005

Well done, David. Certainly a lovely poem and rhymed to perfection!

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