Monday, April 11, 2016

Patch Of Grey Comments

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That excruciating
Pain that hurts
Turmoil within
That aches
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Terry Craddock 12 April 2016

I have held I have walked To lonely nights I have talked To all my tears Once again I have lost my favourite lines within this poem, all leading onward to the personal battle burns, scares earned, ultimately leading into dusk, melting away into the formless blob, a patch of grey, the pain of insufferable loneliness, the excruciating pain which haunts in unbearable turmoil, the shadows of melancholy which chokes the life force within our souls, if we do not open a door into bliss beauty light 10***

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Kishore Kumar Das 11 April 2016

melancholy depicted nicely.....

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 April 2016

To all my tears! Thanks for sharing.

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