Pastorpreneurs Comments

Liked the powerful closure lines. A great poem.

A vivid and brilliant depiction of deceit and the greed for material things. So sad that these spiritual.leaders who are tasked to provide.guidance, careand teaching are the ones that will make the lives of its members miserable.

Please I need the poetic analysis of the poem "Pastorpreneur"

Each and every stanza stands out expressing in detail the abuses committed by pastors. Another powerful expose.

A well expressed and presented poem.

A powerful and very incisive write. A great expose on the evilness of those who are clothed as Men Of God. Brilliantly crafted and expressed.

In an era of material excesses, 'Pastorpreneurs' are the raiders of the Lord's Vineyard.

well penned poignant poem, Excellent and thanks so much for sharing with 5 stars

Pastorpreneurs are the raiders of the Lords vineyard. A powerfully written poem making people aware of false preaching and deceit! .. Very heart moving! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++ Excellent photo too! ..

In an era of material excesses, 'Pastorpreneurs' are the raiders of the Lord's Vineyard. The world is a little twisted!

A very good appraisal. Holy 'lifters' such as these are present in all religions. They preach out spirituality and practice materialism and burglary. Full rating

Love the image of the wolf in sheep's clothing!

Driven by putrid stench of materialism, they peddle The Holy Word for profit at the expense of worshippers, This is a universal truth now a days not only in Christianity alone, but also in almost all religions! True devotees feel disillusioned and disturbed by the business interest and the avarice for wealth behind every seemingly pious ritual. As I have already commented on this poem, I don't want to delve any further.

Your eloquent poem carries a powerful, meaningful and truthful message message that needs to be heard. Great poem!

You have selected an important topic to write about and you wrote about it with your usual intelligence and fiery indignation. Thank you Pastorpreneurs' are the raiders of Lord's Vineyard.

....And let me add, the picture accompanying the poem tells a lot, worth thousand words as they say.

Yes indeed, religion has become a business enterprise, and pastors and priest and all god's so-called representatives, entrepreneurs. Yes, forgets god's agents and follow the dictates of your inner voice/conscience. That is the self to be sought.

Another powerful, incisve and perceptuve write. A wonderful write that vividly portrays the greediness of people that even the House of the Lord is an instrument to spread materialism. Beautifully and masterfully penned.

u dear my dear are a contemporary poet wit words at create d right picture of our time. Great write

Very apt word, “pastorpreneurs”. As Karl Marx said, Religion is the opium of man. So, anything sells in the name of religion. Anywhere. Very poignant write. Powerful and forthright. Well done.