Saturday, October 8, 2016

Pastoral Verse On Swimming Experience Comments

Rating: 4.7

How nice to swim in sea, river, lake and pond!
Floating body, pressing water, moving forward
How nice to enjoy spattering, splashing sound!
Gesturing body, flapping wing, clapping hand,
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Muzahidul Reza
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 December 2018

very beautiful we in Canada also pay while swimming in beaches that's the order of the day Nice swimming but I am a non swimmer I swim in a tub with no water...lol u may lie to correct a typo lately? ? ? ? returned home

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Great Reader 13 February 2018

What an extraordinayr verse on pastoral background! Which reminds lots of past memories, love it, thank you poet

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Fiadh Fida 16 December 2017

Pastoral verse so wonderful, I did not know before, great piece of writings, thanks for sharing

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Robert Rhyme 29 October 2017

But funless swimming, charmless time passing, , , , , , wonderful written

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Muzahidul Reza 06 January 2018

Thanks a lot dear gret poet for your commenting

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Robert Rhyme 29 October 2017

Pastoral Verse On Swimming Experience a great poem on swimming experience, thanks for sharing,10

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Offeliya Seema 17 October 2017

Now, we swim paying money in swimming pool And in artificial lake without lily though waterful But funless swimming, charmless time passing Though it is a game here with heavy contesting. exactly depicted,10

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John Paul 15 October 2017

Swimming Experience so outstanding one, thanks for sharing 10

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Evi Evi 14 October 2017

Swimming Experience is a fantastic poem 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2017

I remember! ! To cross the local river! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ena Ena 03 May 2017

But funless swimming, charmless time passing Though it is a game here with heavy contesting.

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Gajanan Mishra 08 October 2016

charmless time passing, good one

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