Tuesday, July 26, 2016
Past (Senryu) Comments
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let me take you down
this river of nostalgia;
in a paper boat
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Gil Highlander
26 July 2016
Vivid imagination comes to bear, transported in a paper boat. A perfect 10.
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Stephen Park
26 July 2016
Superb senryu, thanks for taking me down my past, all in a flash!
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8/2/2025 5:28:49 PM # 1.0.0
The past is water under the bridge. So I love your paper boat depiction, the past is history and the paper boat should not get to its destination.