Friday, August 28, 2009

Past, Present, Future Comments

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i lived in the past for so long
that the present was always unknown.

now i always look ahead at all the possibilities
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louis rams
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 19 February 2015

Hello poet Louis. I enjoyed your insightful, philosophical poem. Well done! Loyd

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 January 2010

i lived in the past for so long that the present was always unknown. now i always look ahead at all the possibilities and there is so much, that i now see..it is sign of great visionary that he thinks of past, lives in present and plans for tomorrow..... lovely concept.. i liked i t. read mine yes to to...what abt tomorrow

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~ Jon London ~ 29 August 2009

Great piece to share Louis my friend.....I just wish I got to read this poem years ago.....excellent work 10

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 August 2009

First thing you did a great job in this write. Secondly it was not confusing, you made it really simple to follow.The philosophy of your is good. Wish to see more such lines from you my friend. Wonderful paint you had painted in my mind with this beautiful theme.

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 August 2009

I just loved the argumentative manner in which you expressed yourself.. very much like a lawyer proving his case in a court room! ! ! I am sure jury will agree with you.. I will send how I feel via mail... But this poem is always an exhilarating read. I love when people express their view in such argumentative manner.. good...10++ lov shan

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dr veenaa rai 29 August 2009

lovely words of wisdom..

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Ted M 29 August 2009

A beautiful write. We tend to live in the past and waste the precious time in wasteful activities. thanks for sharing...............10+++

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nice philosophy.. i agree.

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