Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Past, Present, Future Comments

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To my unkown i meet the one.
Talking by note to take a stand.
Till the day where i come up
And take her by the hand.
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Jeremy Bailey
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Greenwolfe 1962 02 February 2009

This makes me wonder what the secret is. Unless I miss something. This is a short and simple poem with a mystery. I'm not sure I like that, but it is what it is. I thought the writing was OK. GW62

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