Friday, January 12, 2018

Past Present And Future Comments

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My past is an indication of where i have been
A realisation of what was not working
Casting aside what was familiar
Snuffed out as no longer comfortable
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susette varga
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Frank Adie 14 January 2018

It is my opinion that life is all about past and present. The future is to me the vaguest ever. I like this poem. it is very deep.

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Victor Adex 12 January 2018

intresting read, as life is a fair concucted mix of experiences, and the future is the evolution of such past occurrences mixed with todays decision. like any metamorphosis, the quest to better one's self will be demanding and undauting, all the best. i do believe that a interest in imagery could boost the punch on which your poem is delivered.

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