Thursday, April 1, 2010

* Past Love~ Comments

Rating: 3.1

The golden chain that glued
Our hearts upon the branch
Is broken beyond repair
All around are fragments
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Eyan Desir
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Miriam Maia Padua 30 September 2011

nicely written, my friend... touching....past leads us to a happy present and a strong tomorrow... Thank you so much for the book..I appreciate and i am very happy and thankful you have given me that treasure....your book is a treasure, a jewel to keep... But i was hoping you have your autograph on it.. Thanks a lot, my friend

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Ais Jaime 09 August 2011

past is something we can hardly endure specially if we still want to have its back... very touching poem.

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Kesav Easwaran 13 May 2010

very much poignant Eyan...cheer up...your poem is good...10

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Nathan Chilton 29 April 2010

This poem is nicely done and i like it

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Lady Grace 01 April 2010

nicely done ian..bitterness is in the hands of time...happiness is in the air we breath..sometimes, love is faithful or unfaithful and sometimes love hurts but sometimes love has fulfillment of success....i go wth proper choosing of partners, and i go wth respect and proper communication, ., , , one must be open, one must not make lies or else sweetness will turn into sour.... for me, the poem expresses sad but moving...nicely done ian..

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D H 01 April 2010

Great poem, sadness endures me by reminding me of past love, and you published your poetry? ! I wish I can do that but I am too young heh, please would you read my poetry? I would be honored.

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