Tuesday, November 10, 2015

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Rating: 5.0

Placid lady—
Sitting on white-fringed bed;
Eyes, looking lost and vacant,
Often staring straight ahead.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2015

Those portrayed their names with wonderful scene. Amazing poem share with reality...10

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R B Seals 04 December 2015

Thank you for your keen interest in the writing. I appreciated very much your comment and the very kind rating you bestowed upon it. Best wishes in all your endeavors!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 November 2015

Life detached An existence once dynamic Vibrant, loving, giving Crumbling into dust' Very pitiable fate. The blow given by fate and time is lamentable. But, this is life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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R B Seals 16 November 2015

Alzheimer's disease...indeed, a scourge that debilitates then destroys the precious acts of thought, remembrance and the emotional foundation that makes us all uniquely human. A cure cannot come too soon! Thank you for your commentary and your rating of 10. Best wishes in all your endeavors!

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