Monday, August 20, 2012

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Flew with it and it took me alone,
to an unknown place of peace and beauty,
Where everyone shared every happiness of others,
And stood by them in moments of grief,
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Jahan Zeb
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Dave Walker 05 October 2012

A fantastic poem, maybe one day the world will be like this.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 September 2012

Ah yes d good old days when d world was more moral, no wonder few wil make it to paradise frm these times. Nice to read yor fabulous poem. Kudos 4 it.

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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