~ Past ~ Comments

Man will never learn past present and future your poem cries a plea..too busy to hear man too busy blowing each other up...10/10 for concerning write regards

You have captured, with all these discriptive words the past in a very unusual way. A good write.

Short words with sure shot effect. Stunning.

Very interesting poem, Niv. It's vital for us to understand the past if we are to move forward into a progressive furture.

Everything is so true...i lost in the melody created by u! ...oh glad to read this piece! yeah now we are in present time...soon this moment will be 'past time' but when somebody read this again it will recall and bring this to present again, yet it sound like this poem will never old and eternal....at least before it deleted from poem hunter..hope not

you listen, you read, the past is your feed. it fills you up with so many things, but above all the joys it brings.

Dear Mom Almedia-ji “Nothing last forever but Forever [and you my Love].’…I acknowledge with genu-flexion Joy Joy Joy that you’re singing ‘tapping my feet’…it is said ‘if one can make one smile/dance/sing or weep/shed sigh’ poetry has reached to that level…and successful as you’re tapping your feet…is equal to Joy Joy Joy Regards niv =========== Copy to Mom Almedia-ji [suffix 'ji' used in India as token of honor reverence]

With music in the background, I comment –I read your poems- like I write mine- listening to music and reading my beautiful Niv in deep conversation while dancing not leaving any thing unsaid or done, Ms. Niv partner with “Half of past, Time, and you” while Past’s: “half of, time, you, in womb in future Present become entirety” All the while I’m reading and listening to one of my favorite singers [Willie Nelson] “Nothing last forever but Forever [and you my Love]. Allow me to sing along with you my daughter: I’m humming -“lesses” [eternal time] as you sing the word-you’re younger and remember them [LOL] Stored in O Past’s limitless cache: entire civilizations and their attitudes and behaviors, why? They belong in Back-Packs-unless one so choose to carry them around. I say, ” don’t pack: “hate, agony vengeance, battles”[instead save that space for LOVE. Ms. Niv, keep on singing and dancing [I’m singing along and tapping my feet [LOL] as I also “read” and “listen”, and, all the while, turning my “face toward the past”[Willie Nelson] thanking about Bach, Beethoven et al [time just archives and we archivist pull out that which is necessary to guide us through the present into the future] I also hear music in “New Format” the blues and country and western music et al! Dear, … I see you’ve partnered with ‘Present’… this will be brief, before you kindly put “Present” in the arms of “Past” O Past: Thy excellence Thy glory story Thy euphony cacophony Psalm chant Universale Booze blotto me in Rhapsodic richness Thanks my dear for writing and sharing this lovely poem. O how I enjoyed reading and singing along with you…I danced until I became winded [LOL]

Words are placed as strong single beats, and inside the poem the monologue shifts the audience from YOU to PAST, leaving much room for the reader to decipher. There is eulogy somewhere in the end. Different and like a hard [shot] down the throat.10

O’ Sage Past Jingle quiescent harp Kibosh not my abode Bring vibe Flutter fibril In showering bounty With new age Tagore Beatles Deon MJ Thro’ Whispering notes I’ll Listen I’ll Listen I’ll Listen. the best part.........y've explained plenty in few words, loved it. it's one of those dramatic n artisitc pieces.10+++.

O’ Sage Past Jingle quiescent harp Kibosh not my abode Bring vibe Flutter fibril In showering bounty With new age Tagore Beatles Deon MJ Thro’ Whispering notes I’ll Listen I’ll Listen I’ll Listen. the best part.........y've explained plenty in few words, loved it. it's one of those dramatic n artisitc pieces.10+++.

The structure of the poem is different, liked it nice imagination well written thank you for sharing.....

Hi Nivedita, I like this poem. Each line is a balancing element to strengthen the subject line, with originality.

The structure of the poem is very different, but i like it, for the poem its self I cannot derive a definite theme or meaning. Forgive me, but I was lost throughout the poem. Your friend Lynn

one thing that i woud like to higlight is the image of eternal and divine entity. the poem to me it seems all about a god -the yesterday's glory, today's manifestation, tomorrow's union yet all the same and will never change...just the god of was, is, will be.... nice

Thy excellence Thy glory story Thy euphony cacophony Psalm chant Universal Booze blotto me in Rhapsodic richness. It is nice to live I glorious past too and mind that history never repeats. Pick the threads from past weave it in present and present it for beautiful tomorrow... lovely concept and poem too.. niv smile On glorious past Doubts never cast Life is so precious and fast Sky and horizons are also so vast Only we are mortals and may not last Live gracefully in presence Understand its utility and essence Not to forget past easily and hence Just peep through and minutely glance Bring drastic change in stance Answer honestly to the call Prevent any further fall House all epics in one hall Break the prevailing hatred wall Peace and tranquility shall read mine.. poet can...

I love the way your poem reaches back and pulled the past into the future...good read Niv

Poet riding in time machine tired to reach mute Past and it’s all the riches and nuggets begged alms from the Wise Past for the present and future …as beckon light and spotlight... 10 dr.sakti .

Prof S. Hawking tried to trace the history of time…A Brief History of Time From Big Bang To Black Hole [reported as best seller but least read! ] …mathematically / scientifically it may be fathomable…as in ‘Involuted’ state [Veda] before Big Bang was there no Time? Poet tried to make past eloquent mute …excellent imagination…as if a retrieval gizmo...Past is...imaginatively 10++ AB London

Appealed to silent ‘Past’ to come alive and finish is: ‘…Thy excellence // Thy glory story // Thy euphony cacophony // Psalm chant Universale // Booze blotto me in // Rhapsodic richness.’ Poet wants to in ‘blotto’ yet ‘Rhapsodic richness’ 10+++ Dr. V