Friday, July 19, 2013

Password Of My Life Comments

Rating: 3.8

I have a well managed three dimensional structure
that makes me one among the crowd of all of you
I sing before humanity and beg him to return my soul
and, in return I get a whole wide mouth of respect
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Vishal Sharma
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Sanjukta Nag 30 October 2015

Everyone needs someone special in his/her life who will become the password of his/her life. Good concept. The misery of life is well expressed.

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Vishal Sharma 16 October 2015

wrote it when i was feeling low in life verse to make me get up

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 August 2013

Lovely poem Vishal.. Interesting to read your poem..

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Hazel Durham 29 July 2013

Change your mindset will set you free, an interesting write that reflects on your life with great lines!

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Payal Parande 23 July 2013

interesting indeed each word new and tell the story you want to, good one dear keep on going love di

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Ramesh Rai 22 July 2013

i think you are still unmarried. no matter a poet can imagine.

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Onyeme John 20 July 2013

Witty, interesting and full of driving words. Nice...

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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

we all need a password to our life. then it would not be so easily disturbed. a good write

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Heather Wilkins 19 July 2013

we all need a password to our life. then it would not be so easily disturbed. a good write

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