(passionate Picnic)on A Hill Comments

Fully cladding with passion and metaphor… ‘Where serenity does (take place) to heal’ ~ Hill Tops makes bosom broaden and full of Bliss that you’ve portrayed very beautifully nice joy ride… thanks sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

A romantic love poem, with charming rhyming and powerful imageries, good only for the learned. O' Eruchie, you're a complex poet in the like of Wole Soyinka, the William Shakespeare of Africa!

Nice good for lovers.10

sweet piece.. and sweet peace

...liked your way of tackling words.....

Very nice man, thank you for sharing it.

Brilliant piece Obinna. Really enjoyed it. Good work

Well done Obinna, this was truly a sensuous read to ponder.Never be still, keep climbing that hill.The best, PRINCE

you have done good..nice poem..the last two lines are in covert..clap clap

great poem.......................

nice to see the other side of your pen. However difficult we all have vowed internally to master the language of love or is it passion :)

Quite often, a place makes all the difference. By making it atop the hill, the couple have carried their love to its height. The unique blend of height, greenery, waft of rejuvenating breeze, ineffable solitude, vast blue skies, and overview from there, everything that is there … catalyzes the chemistry of their love. An elevating poem with a sweet rhyme.

although there's no sign of food, this passionate picnic tells me they had their fill and the last two lines tell me how scrumptious!

A good write, though the significance of all those brackets eluded me.

the duo finds a secluded place within the poem - (Picnic) (take place) etc; very nice

In each other’s eyes (wanting) as they will, Rachel Ann Butler

WONDERFUL.... I can't say anything else: D

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this is wonderful. Awesome description of a passion.. Heart tickling to the imaginative!

Very interesting. =))