Saturday, March 22, 2014

Passion (Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 5.0

This passion never seems to find its end: —
Is it its secrecy of love so deep?
Feels almost vital like the air I breathe;
Resonance of thrilling sounds in heart sends.
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 December 2018

Your company is no longer of a need: Leave my mind, and no more thoughts in seed! Now I shall laugh and dance with Life's kind; Forget the time when I was sad and blind, And celebrate the feast of life with pride! ........nice poetic expression. A beautiful poem so nicely delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2018

You have immaculately expressed your love and passion in this fabulous poem! I just will cite two lines of this poem that impressed me much: Leave my mind, and no more thoughts in seed! /Now I shall laugh and dance with Life's kind. I vote it with a 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 May 2016

With me in spirit! Thanks for sharing.

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