Wednesday, July 15, 2015

Passion's Play Comments

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Passion’s play is a crystal ball
Changing luster with a call
“Hello” I’m quietly in waiting
for your sensual painting.
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Paul Amrod
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Paul Amrod 16 July 2015

Hi Antony, You are well on the way to understand what I meant by this poem. Thank you so much for your inspiration, Paul

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2015

The rising of your impassioned spirit To the galaxies for enrichment Soothe the passing whim With an excursion or a visit to a place of absolution. i like these lines in your poem. the call of the divine, passion, love, ectasy. very good poem. write my dear Arnold. it is a divine call to write. God bless you always. antony

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