Friday, May 13, 2005

Passion's Place Comments

Rating: 3.6

I walk to the edge of the earth
With one step
I am deep in your hearth
Slipping into your arms
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Savannah Churchill
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Adryan Barnathan 07 January 2006

A wonderful tenuous rendition of glorious love ~ Speaks of soft kisses that transform to the sacred.....Just beautiful ~

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Charles Chaim Wax 25 December 2005

the total exertion of a single thing one with soul and flesh to keep there the great task the yearning for that grasps the heart never lets go and at times gives the world fine poems as this one is

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I couldn't get past the first line on this one.

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