Passion Precession Comments

sweet & smart poem, love keeps its momentums, and powers

coll couplets....short but meaningful....10

To convey a message in rhyming is indeed difficult but you seem to master the art, very descriptive and creative write, Saadat!

lovely couplets each a masterpiece as always a tenner for you anjali

Wonderful rhythmic poem, short and terse like. Conical spin of a long cry exhausted in timeless tales of love and pain. Good couplets, Saadat. Regards Naseer

sweet poem and writing

dannng lol i like it

i already told you that you have a mastery over couplets...

...... Few words/ great meanings.......

good 'passion precession' words parade...gives a nice tasty insight...thanks...10

very effecient writing sir......insightful...10

very perceptive, Saadat. good observations Mamta