*** Passion *** Comments

i like dogs they are poopppppphyhyy

great....i feel like in a place you beautifully written.... written with passion... written with brilliancy....with your exemplary techniques of choosing words.... wonderful imaginations...vivid description of beautiful places from the captivating beauty of nature to the enchanting beauty of the universe... the melody and then traveling towards infinity.. wonderful......marvelous work of poetry...... 10++++

I love this one, it seems it would fit the mood of a muse album... influenced?

The poem is a rare combination of - a rich imagination power, a wonderful command of the language, and an effortless poetic expression. A marvellous work.

I love the picture you brought to my head. Keep writing this is wonderful

I love this poem keep writing you are doing great

what can I say? it's so perfect the way it is and needs not nothing more to be added. I like the appreciation of u to the wonders of the world and truly they look great and I like the idea too u painted in this piece and I 'd like to think that way too :) I 'm waiting for new pieces from u soon. good luck.

I read and re read this piece of legacy......you have excelled! in your passage through.......the vast and mystic journey of life.......and passion and the ending lines are just superb!

Passion convey a message of deep apreciation to the creation of God- the evolution of life towards its fullness. nice piece and i like it...let us continue the legacy of poetry, and let us make poetry as a tool to make a difference.

yo reallly love it you really put your heart and soul into it keep it up

wowww... every single word seem so perfect. hoping more excellent poems from you soon.

excellent! you covers all humankind's love and passion, Sir.

Excellent poem. Good stuff.

That was a very interesting, very good poem...pulled some heartstrings. I give it a ten.

A wonderful structure of romantic piece and imagery, you have finely crafted your tone all the similes and metaphors. You did a great job here, very striking on too much of your hyperbole... a 10.

i love the 1st line so, so, so much! it is so true, some of the world doesnt seem real or even part of the earth. a touching piece. -maddy

Your references to love as seen through the universes greatest marvels is striking. I particularly like your idea of building an igloo for two. It seems an apt discription given all that's happening in the world.

Very beautiful and congratulations on making it to the top 500 poems.Your poem takes your love to depth breadth and hieghts of the universe.Wonderfully written and I felt like I was traveling with you.A ten from me, too.

Sulaiman Bhai, It is a rarity though, but I am out of words... :) What a great thought; falwlessly composed... 'Could we excel on no man’s land? ' You have already excelled my brother... When you say I treated your internal wounds Like Oasis says ‘stop crying your heart out’ After reading it, I feel so high and i can bet; no stimulant drug can give such a high... Great Indeed... Wish you a great journey in your life Your brother Kamran

You open the heavens, the cosmos, and they rain 'terrains of passion' to flood our earthly souls with Sulaiman's stars