Passion Comments

Dee this is excellent, I am left with a passion to read more of your work.

Absolutely wonderful! ! ! Very good work.

wow, simply a winner! and what a punchline for an ending. 'ohhh, what passion! '

Excellent story poem, Dee. I wasn't quite sure what it was all about until I read it for the second time. Then it became crystal clear. Great piece of work. You never disappoint! Love, Fran xxx

Men don't have a clue to the passion some women are capable of....

Dee, I guess that we know the first part! I guess that we know the third part! What about the second part ? I imagine that it has a lot to do, with where the two of you had lunch! ... as Diane alluded to. B.V.A.

Oh Dee, I have to agree with the three ladies before me, you do have a flair........ and when I heard you mention the bangs and clangs somehow I wasn't picturing a quaint restaurant as you were saying your goodbye's. Sometimes passion be the death of us! ................................Diane

You have a real gift for writing drama, Dee and this is no exception. I beautifully expressed piece about relationships and the highs and lows of passion. The last stanza was compelling indeed! love, Allie xxxx

This has a kind of familiar alarm-bell ringing about it. And it is superbly written Dee. Kudos. t x

Very well written, Dee. Friendships - oh my, what would I have done without them through the years - and the tears? Brings back memories. You're a great writer. Marilyn