Saturday, November 13, 2010

Passing On (Death Death Death Death Death) Comments

Rating: ★3.1

To be absent from the body
Is to be present with the Lord
The dust returns to earth
The spirit returns to God Who gave it
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Udiah (witness to Yah)
death
COMMENTS
Kay Staley 26 March 2015

The flow of the poem is disrupted by the egregious amount of syllables in the last line.

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Kirti Sharma 01 May 2014

wow..... words are nicely used.... good poem!

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Alam Saj M.n 09 November 2013

nice one... wish u would continue it and make it a better one

3 1 Reply
Mahmuod Shahidi 05 September 2012

nice simple explanation of death

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