Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Passing Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun trimmed the night sky
Little by little as the stars said “bye”
a male humming birds hum
While he sip the flowers’ rum
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john wake
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Rajendran Muthiah 01 March 2012

Wonderful poem! The word, 'pee' smells bad. Diction, Variety in the syntax of lines, abundant use of words of single syllables and hence the flow, everything beautiful Mr. John Wake. I find poets from Africa are inspired by Nature as well as by the Muse of the Language. Excellent.

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Binish Cd 24 December 2011

a beautiful poem....

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