Friday, October 13, 2017

Passing By Comments

Rating: 5.0

The seasons leave
like grown children moving
out of the house -
It's fall now
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Smoky Hoss
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Varsha M 31 January 2021

Do i feel its nature who teachese us to look for change of seasons snd get refreshed. Beautiful composition.

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Varsha M 31 January 2021

Change of seasons everyone wants. Stagnation is a sign of ruin. Moving on witj season makes us survive.

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Susan Williams 31 January 2021

This poem surpasses all I have read lately---it calls to its reader like a bird out on the lake in the moonlight

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Susan Williams 31 January 2021

Word to word, image to image, this poem is the most soulful I have ever read

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2017

Fearing cold beyond words amazes mind really. This is amazingly penned seasonal poem shared.10

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