The sky is littered with stars
The grove stands silent under it
They lower the body down into the hole
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A wonderful and vivid depiction of another journey. Great imagery and beautiful poetic expressions. Top Marks!
I agree with David...we all are marching towards the same destination only... you have made it deeper in meaning in just three lines....liked
We are all on the same path. Some out in a hole, some go up in smoke, and some just disappear.
Great imagery, nice presentation.