Monday, August 28, 2006

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He comes home to find Grandma, still –
sitting amidst the papers and magazines,
the dirtied grey furniture,
the crumbling walls and curtains stained
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Linda Hepner 04 September 2006

Strong images and texture. I do however find this more of a confession than your previous poems which take us to another layer of thought. Perhaps though it's my fear talking!

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Kelly Gemmill 29 August 2006

i love the image in that last stanza- very strong

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essex, england / carmathen, wales
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