Passerina Cyanea Comments

Oh, What a adorably, beautiful bird tune! .. Quite beautifully painted sounds so peaceful and brings smiles too! .. Beautiful photo too! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

Marvellous poem, beautiful pic.

Aha! I see what you did here, my dear friend Belle! In addition to having exactly seven syllables per line and some fun rhymes, there are THREE other elements at play here that make this poem nothing short of genius! Should I tell the other readers what they are?

isn't it a glorious way to worship the Creator by enjoying his Creation! ! ! 5 stars

To Dr. Dillip K. Swain: I googled Murray School of Poetry and nothing came up.

Thank you to those who have already commented!

I wish Poem Hunter would not add line breaks where they do not belong! This poem is supposed to be just two stanzas, with six lines in the first, and seven lines in the second!

Lovely poem, dear Belle, this bird kind often migrates by night, using the stars to navigate.. So adventurous.5 Stars fullest!

It's a beautiful poem. I like poets of Canada. Some modern poets of Canada are trained from Murray School of Poetry at Adelaide mentored by a delightful soul. If you don't belong to that school, please take chance to fine tune your poetry!