I boarded the amusing crowded train.
Traveling thru unknown path
With full of ups and downs.
With a peculiar conditions
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Just take a stop before destination and watch on scenic perception during journey. Feeble passenger realizes other passengers. Train continues moving and bags also in train. This poem mesmerizes mind....10
Travel of life nicely described by the poetess, she leaves much on the readers and forces them to think. The readers think and understand this lovely poem in their own frame of reference. A great write by Geetha Jaya Kumar.
Travelling through unknow path. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Life is a long journey....! We board a train and travel from station to station! As we move in life our bag of experiences become bigger with our possessions bulging out until we are about to get down. After our retirement our bag becomes emptier and we become weaker and more lonely! This is the case with each and every one of us! An insightful write, Geetha!