Thursday, February 1, 2007

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I stood waiting for you in the rear parking lot
Turns out you drove off without me
And I hear your picked up a passenger on your way
to keep your mind from drifting
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Faith Wood
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Ivan Donn Carswell 09 February 2007

Faith, you have partitioned off what you know to be true and what you want to be true - then you claim to be strong enough to believe what you want. I know what you mean, but are you? This is a fabulously complex poem stated with minimal form and superbly simple word choice. Great work. Rgds, Ivan

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Faith Wood

Faith Wood

Albany, Ny
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