Friday, March 10, 2017

Passel Of Prisms Comments

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Sweet potato flowers
blooming in a Louisiana garden
a careful mix of beauty and fragility
are we two not the same?
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Nika McGuin
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Bri Edwards 29 April 2017

nice 'alliterating' title.

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Bri Edwards 29 April 2017

as i suggested in my first comment: i am now taking this to adorn my/our May showcase. Thanks. i shall also affix your Poet's Notes beneath your poem in the showcase. bri :) and to MyPoemList.

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Bri Edwards 24 April 2017

i read Poet's Notes first, after the title. my soul is black! kidding. i've heard the word passel YEARS ago, but i did not know how to spell it. :) your bio states that you 'used to think of poetry together with rhyming', but now not so much. but i do like these two lines especially, partly for the rhyme: discussing our differences in hue that of: 'But I'm purple and he's blue.' bri :) maybe i'll take it for my/our May showcase. hmm?

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