Saturday, April 17, 2010

Passage Over Water Comments

Rating: 4.6

We have gone out in boats upon the sea at night,
lost, and the vast waters close traps of fear about us.
The boats are driven apart, and we are alone at last
under the incalculable sky, listless, diseased with stars.
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Robert Duncan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2024

TWO: The poem delves into the feelings of separation and the struggle to find connection and meaning amidst the chaos

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 August 2024

ONE: This poem explores themes of isolation, fear, and the passage of time. The imagery of being lost at sea at night symbolizes the vast, often overwhelming nature of human emotions and experiences.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 February 2013

dark wound closed in behind us. great write,

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