Thursday, August 29, 2013

Passage Of Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Grass remains lush
forest green
if properly watered
and fed
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Heather Burns
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Geetha Jayakumar 30 August 2013

Everything fades with the time..Beautifully way presented..Loved reading it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2013

Petals falling, leaves on the ground, tree limbs drying up all showing passage of time. Feelings resonating. Beautifully presented. Thank you.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 30 August 2013

Very nice poem on the passage of man's life

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Mohabeer Beeharry 29 August 2013

Time is a great healer. But I would rather choose before having to be healed. Sweet poem. Although with a touch of despair I like it. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Dave Walker 29 August 2013

Everything fades with time but the memories always stay. A great poem.

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