Friday, January 3, 2003

Party Piece Comments

Rating: 4.1

He said:

'Let's stay here
Now this place has emptied
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Brian Patten
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Paresh Chakra 04 December 2018

This is a very interesting poem

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Brian Jani 09 May 2014

Brian Wow I enjoyed your poem nice one

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Martin O'Neill 08 March 2012

This is just superb. The evocation of place and atmosphere - Woodbines, Guiness, gentle pornogrphy, .... and the ending caps it all. Love this poem.

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Maxwell Ryan 22 June 2009

One of the great poems. Shows you don't have to be obscure or clever. 'The mad, mangled crocodile of love', fab!

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Penelope Goring 08 March 2009

I got The Mersey Sound for my 10th birthday from our lodger. It is still one of my best loved books.

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