Party In The Sky....Everyone Invited! ! Comments

This is an amazing concept in this poem.

Beautiful-there is nothing like the magical mystery tour-it's so cosmic.Brilliant poem...Tens and kudos.

That's an amazing concept! Deb

This is so optimistic! I love it...i want to party in the sky....or atleast take enough drugs where i think i am jk!

wow...what a poem! makes me journey with every lines....how i wished it will be real.... I wanna be there....

beautifull poem this is my favourite so far lovely i loveede each word u used i cant quote a single line coz evry line was beautiful outstanding thought 10 10 10 10

The Stars are going to strip and dance The Mountains are going to steal a glance The Moon is wearing a designer halo from France The Music and Dance are going to romance fantastic lines

wondering weaving of words for a desirable rhythm and flow keep going up!

simply beautiful thanks i was invited for the party i enjoyed the words and the flow +10 dear resh regards anjali (do read mine THIS ONE IS FOR ME)

This was an amazing, beautiful poem. And I think you should try to publish it. There are some literary mags who won't accept rhymes, but there are also ones that do. The poem was lively, it flowed and I don't think I saw one wrong word in it. Plus it's a nature poem. Kaye

Excellant theme. Excellant painting.But you made it very narrative.Poetry is not prose to speak thousands of words.

I love how the words flow and make a great visualization

Imagination Personified! wonderful imagery tranforms the skyline of my mind

Imagination ablaze - a poem from a good poet.

wonderfull! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ammmmmmmazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .........10+

Deligtful flighr of fancy offered up in monrhyme stanzas

What a superb party for my 'Friends in the Sky' The idea also seems to be from the sky...my 10

A rare combination of a rich imagination power, effective narrative skill and a sound command of the language, that is what the poem personifies.

very nice constillating... you get a big bang out of this. rhyming is so beautiful, a melody. thank you very much.md

Really nice title and a good poem with ending rhymes. The present one is good but you can make it better through a bit of editing, I am sure. WELL DONE ANYWAY, Reshma. dr john celes