Wednesday, September 27, 2017

Parts And Pieces Comments

Rating: 4.8

Yes, my arms and legs are me you see
What is wrong with two blue circles in brown
Whether upstanding or slightly sharp down I frown
From a catching continent this was sent to me.
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Abigail Valkenburg
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Abigail. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 29 September 2017

Nice piece of poetry, well articulated in good rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Abigail.

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Thank you.

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