Monday, November 3, 2008

Partner Comments

Rating: 4.8

Turn around who do you see
this is who your partner will be

Tlk to your partner
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 November 2008

Partner? .....of what? short term or long term or just for fun? Its better to have a friend that could read your mind and accustom to your needs rather than a partner for the sake of fun.Nice rhyme and good job K 8!

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Boris Barron 05 November 2008

Really good poem rhymed really well sorry If I gave you a 9 but Im a hard rater unless its perfect I dont give it a 10 great job try to make a few lines rhyme better in my oppinion.

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Maximillian Okere 05 November 2008

Great Job! ! ! This one is pretty cool: D 10's up lol! ! !

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Chocolate Bunny 03 November 2008

awesome job. I got square dancing imagery all in my head until you finally found the right partner. Good one.

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