Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Parting Ways Comments

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I'm sorry things didn't work out between us
I wish things could've been diffrent
maybe if you weren't so bossy
always trying to control my life
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elena winters
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Dislocated Heart 27 November 2008

Yeah, I agree with your poem there. :) Nice write! :)

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C. P. Sharma 25 November 2008

hi breeze, Even the river that flows Has to bear hard surface blows, But gradually singing its sweet song Twists and turns, finally makes its way It never leaves the touch with the ground to fly away. CP

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C T Heart 25 November 2008

Better to build your own castle and gain worthy for yourself, but leaving someone to have one is not the answer...time will come Mr. Right will find you...never rush. Thanks for sharing.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 November 2008

Oh dear don't turn your back on true love otherwise.............if you think its right to do so.Nice works Breeze.

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James Mclain 25 November 2008

nice way to look at things.....

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elena winters

elena winters

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