Wednesday, January 12, 2005

Parting Of Ways Comments

Rating: 4.5

Don’t you dare tell me you didn’t feel it,
The sparks from our first kiss,
It lasted for a lifetime and ended too soon.
...
Read full text

Warren Augustus de Guzman
COMMENTS
Allan James Saywell 13 January 2005

Warren oh to be young again, i forgot about young love, i get my heat from a bowl of chillies, you get it elsewhere, which is healthy a good attempt at trying to communicate with a young woman I just have a whiskey and dream Kind regards AJS

0 0 Reply
Sandra Osborne 13 January 2005

I liked it. Really got the anguish through. Good work.

0 0 Reply
Herbert Nehrlich1 12 January 2005

....whole night with warmth....posibly replace warmth with vengeance or whatever? Just a thought H

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success