Monday, September 16, 2013

Parting Note Comments

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There’s a blank sheet of paper before me,
It’s as blank as our lives have become,
But nothing’s been said, though the passion is dead,
We still make believe we are one.
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David Lewis Paget
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Lorraine Colon 16 September 2013

Sad poem, but beautifully expressed.

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Noreen Carden 16 September 2013

Hello David How terrible and how sad and hopeless.You write it so well I want you to know that i loved you once But that love has now turned to pain .Those two lines sum up the despair and sadness beautifully Perfection

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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