The red sun yielded to evening,
How should I spell out your parting?
The dark looked light fair when you were,
Bright days now look like nights darkling.
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Excellent write.
The opening line alone will move a reader
to go through with the.whole write.
All lines are very touching that have been woven
to depict the heart rending effects of parting.
" Your absence would strike like lightning."
A beautiful line from a great poem.
Superb imagery.10++++++
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Excellent write. The opening line alone will move a reader to go through with the.whole write. All lines are very touching that have been woven to depict the heart rending effects of parting. " Your absence would strike like lightning." A beautiful line from a great poem. Superb imagery.10++++++
I'm back after a week, and it is nice to read your warm feedback. Thank you Rose Marie.