The red sun yielded to evening,
How should I spell out your parting?
The dark looked light fair when you were,
Bright days now look like nights darkling.
Imprints of your presence so rare
Carved is in heart, all your being,
Your absence would strike like lightning,
Pen on paper words feel wanting.
Emptiness peeping from rear view
From bike's backseat when I see you,
Fresh green blossoms from nowhere beam,
And now with then analysing,
Wonder if my life's swan could swim,
All frozen thoughts should start melting.
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Musings | 06.12.2017 |
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent write. The opening line alone will move a reader to go through with the.whole write. All lines are very touching that have been woven to depict the heart rending effects of parting. " Your absence would strike like lightning." A beautiful line from a great poem. Superb imagery.10++++++
I'm back after a week, and it is nice to read your warm feedback. Thank you Rose Marie.