Let our parting
be sweeter than our union.
Let our forgetting
be more musical than our memory.
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Once love brought us together! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Such a beautiful ode to love. And parting. Such great wisdom! Excellent write, Arun.
Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Arun.
This is no doubt a wonderful work..thanks for sharing...
This is an excellent poem calling for celebration at the time of parting and 'carry the fragrance of love' in place of this being a moment of sorrow, anguish and tears. Amazing thoughts. Let our parting be sweeter than our union. Soul has to part from the body one day or the other.
Beautiful and thought provoking poem. The reasoning given therein and the perspective are valid. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Awesome poem...Once love brought us together. Now, let our love take us far...........These two lines took your poem to a different level.10
inevitable for - we part with something everyday. when we leave our kids in school- we part, when we sell something we part, when we die- soul parts from body. Parting in different magnitude is always happening.
why ''inevitable parting? '' most of the times it is so, but not always.. thus it is not ''inevitable'' - yet, your.. ''Song of the 'inevitable parting'' is nicely written. Thanks for sharing, Arun - and.. WELCOME at P.H.!
inevitable because we part with something everyday. when we leave our kids in school- we part, when we sell something we part, when we die- soul parts from body. Parting in different magnitude is always happening.
but fragrance of love is there for ever, Love is not to go anywhere..
a heart touching piece on life............................10+