Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Parting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let our parting
be sweeter than our union.
Let our forgetting
be more musical than our memory.
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Arun Maji
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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 07 November 2019

a heart touching piece on life............................10+

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 August 2019

Once love brought us together! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Britte Ninad 17 May 2018

love lives here as the smelling of depression....nice

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Arun Maji 17 May 2018

I am blessed with your encouragement. kind regards

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Richard Wlodarski 13 January 2018

Such a beautiful ode to love. And parting. Such great wisdom! Excellent write, Arun.

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Chinedu Dike 17 October 2017

Beautiful love poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Arun.

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Arun Maji 25 February 2017

thank you everyone. you all are kind. regards

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Sriranji Aratisankar 09 September 2016

This is no doubt a wonderful work..thanks for sharing...

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Rajnish Manga 09 December 2015

This is an excellent poem calling for celebration at the time of parting and 'carry the fragrance of love' in place of this being a moment of sorrow, anguish and tears. Amazing thoughts. Let our parting be sweeter than our union. Soul has to part from the body one day or the other.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 December 2015

Beautiful and thought provoking poem. The reasoning given therein and the perspective are valid. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 December 2015

reality is here Arun, thanks..

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2015

Awesome poem...Once love brought us together. Now, let our love take us far...........These two lines took your poem to a different level.10

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Arun Maji 09 September 2015

inevitable for - we part with something everyday. when we leave our kids in school- we part, when we sell something we part, when we die- soul parts from body. Parting in different magnitude is always happening.

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Fabrizio Frosini 09 September 2015

why ''inevitable parting? '' most of the times it is so, but not always.. thus it is not ''inevitable'' - yet, your.. ''Song of the 'inevitable parting'' is nicely written. Thanks for sharing, Arun - and.. WELCOME at P.H.!

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Arun Maji 09 September 2015

inevitable because we part with something everyday. when we leave our kids in school- we part, when we sell something we part, when we die- soul parts from body. Parting in different magnitude is always happening.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 September 2015

but fragrance of love is there for ever, Love is not to go anywhere..

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Arun Maji 09 September 2015

thank you. regards

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