Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Parting Comments

Rating: 4.3

Friends, Brothers, bid me farewell.
Good bye allow me to depart.

As gentle streams we had come together.
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Khairul Ahsan 17 August 2013

Oh, how wonderful a poem this is! The parting note of a babbling brook. Seeds get dispersed from the mother tree (so let it be) A great philosophical observation.

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Trisha Sengupta 14 August 2013

Nice presentation of your thought really liked it!

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Arabella Picken 14 August 2013

This is a really nice poem. Just make sure all the 'i' are in capital

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Paul Brookes 13 August 2013

The river of life flows like the ribbon of friendship and shared memories A very deft well crafted deep poem as deep as the sea. Thanks for Sharing 10/10 BB : O)

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Vishal Sharma 13 August 2013

thats awesome just like my poems lol

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