Tuesday, December 27, 2011

Parting Comments

Rating: 5.0

Forgive me for not counting the fleeting moments
When I am near you.
Time seems considerately blameful to each glances I take…
From soul to soul…as face to face.
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VIRGINIA GELY
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Vanessa Hughes 10 January 2012

The pain of saying goodbye comes over really well in this poem, sad but beautiful. nessy x

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Dave Walker 08 January 2012

A great poem with well chosen words, a great write.

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Vipins Puthooran 27 December 2011

Intellectual, thought-provoking and an expressive poem! ! ! Top marks! ! !

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