Wednesday, September 24, 2008

````part Two````the Dining Comments

Rating: 2.9

the dress hugs you so close,
the silk moves so rythmically
with every breath upon
your magnificent torso.
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Reshma Ramesh 20 October 2008

superb......................

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your smooth pink skin has pores which exude pheromones that gentle zephyrs carry to my raw exposed needs dormant of long ago... awesome just awesome Wardha Jawdat it is not the work of simple minds - exceedingly beautiful I wish these lines were mine

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Sadiqullah Khan 25 September 2008

Are you drunk or smoothly high, , , the poem in the end suddenly takes a different turn as if everything is turned upside down, , , very fine poem...in the sequence, ,10

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