````part One````...The Seduction. Comments

wardha.......that was nice, easy and happy...........well penned

bful usage of words... seductive...enchanting...comely... :)

it was.. twinkle.. just a tinkle it made a hurricane..................! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! is it what they call BARMUDA mystry............. nothing remains...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ........ musings.. so enchanting...! ! !

that seductive nuance, i once decreed was my life....In essence it is about the unsaid the transition from one shade to the other … the transition not the destination. So subtle so deceptive that you can deny under oath

Your way of expressing is excellent.A 10!

this poem descends in thought to one particular point, , life, , starting from sparle to desire, , , the stle is simple and leads the reade line my line, , , a 10 here, ,