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upon you The one I love Please don't stop my tears simply brush them away...... there is bliss inignorance and der donot allow tears to roll out from eyes else it may bring shame and dishonour on you..let you true love come andbrush itaway..well done in poetry and i would wish many more creationfs fromyou...congrats.....10 read mine cry not......a place callled home....welcome...you go back...yes yes yes

i would've rated this, but the rate box was gone-10 for me-what a heartbreaker

Form is very good. Heart felt expressions. Beautifully worded. Deserves 10+++++++

another great piece of writing. like the form of this 1 and the style. your words flow very smoothly.

Please don't stop my tears simply brush them away...................love intense by alienation cry of innocence bewilders at criss-cross, utterly passionate and poignant too, wrought ingeniously by gloomy shadow of alienation, soul crunches deep whispering to the rune of hope of tomorrow, quite heart touching, yet heart awaits meandering.....10+++, thanks for sharing

The last line is great, you seem so fragile

That was very moving :) . I enjoyed it

i liked the last expression......the poem is wonderful i give it 10

Wow! such passionate caaling to come back leaving else..just can be felt the desire and the long wait ya in..Winnie