Sunday, July 1, 2018

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M.J. Lemon
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 August 2022

No, I can't withdraw. We have to proceed inspite of all adverse situations and sorrows. A thought provoking poem in its compactness and precision

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Savita Tyagi 23 January 2019

So heart touching. When I needed strength in foreign land I thought of him. I tend to think he merged into me with all of his love and strength.

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Mj Lemon 24 January 2019

Thank you, Savita. And your words are very moving.

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Valsa George 13 January 2019

Either of it can happen! The death of a father or mother is not something easy to cope up with! It is always painful! I am sure you have experienced the intensity of pain over such a happening!

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Mj Lemon 24 January 2019

Thank you, Valsa. And indeed yes. We all have, or shall.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 September 2018

as individuals we just cry and then move on after they die

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Mj Lemon 07 September 2018

Very true, Poet. Thanks for reading.

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Muhammad Ali 04 August 2018

Strange and mystical bond. Life travels so, live in your child. and die a bit with someone's death and someone's breath. nice poem

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Mj Lemon 04 August 2018

Muhammad, thank you so very much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2018

Death of father gives pain. We feel agony and sorrow in his separation. Part of life when this is lost we cannot tolerate easily. Sadness acquires place in mind for long time. Still father remains in memory. An emotional poem is brilliantly penned...10

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Mj Lemon 25 July 2018

Thank you so much. Perhaps the pain never entirely leaves, but it becomes something we can at least manage.

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Richard Wlodarski 24 July 2018

M.J., when my father died, I felt remorse. The wrongdoing being not making enough of an effort with meaningful communication. Ironically, the poems that I've written about him seem to suggest that that communication did indeed exist. As did the love. You and some other PH poets have helped me come to that realization. Thank you so very much!

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Mj Lemon 24 July 2018

Thank you, Richard. I am moved by your words.

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Unwritten Soul 05 July 2018

Recently i found that my close friends mother passed away and i really feel that lost feeling, i couldnt imagine what my friend feels..its painful for sure, but then we realize that nothing is living forever, so us as well one day..when we lost them, we should still living with the value n things that they keep inside us...and we will always not far away, if it just distance well it is better than losing them far from our emembrance. Hope u be calm my dear Mark....

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Mj Lemon 05 July 2018

So well said, Soul. And this poem was in fact for friend who is going through some of what you suggest. Thank you so much, Soul.

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